Review Week 9 Comments & Feedback

Hi Guys,

Welcome back to my blog, today I will be talking about comments & feedback as it is review week!

Looking over the comments I have been given from my fellow classmates they have been very helpful, they have given me suggestions which I have taken and put into action, they have also given me advice on there thoughts of my game and everyone seems excited to see my final product which in a way is good but also quite scary in case it all goes wrong and the game isn't even playable! 🙈

But overall I do think getting feedback from people whether it is good or bad is very important in this assignment process as I like to see peoples options on my game. The only thing I will say is sometimes when people give me feedback it is not very clear and can be quite confusing to understand where they are coming from with the comments they have made. But overall I am happy with everything else that people have commented on!

https://uxplanet.org/real-world-vs-lab-feedback-fcd25e211157

Writing comments and giving feedback is quite hard for me as I really don't know what to say, if you have looked at my comments on peoples blog posts you will notice I seem to say the same thing over and over again as even though criticism is good so people can learn and grow from it I am always afraid of offending someone has they have put in a lot of hard work! The four strategies have helped me though big time as they have given me the opportunity to express how I feel about there game but overall from the blogs I have read I am excited to see and play peoples games.

Overall this part of the assignment has pushed me out of my comfort zone which is very important especially when you only really know a certain amount of people within the course.

As I go forward with giving feedback and writing comments on peoples blogs I want to learn how to become better at giving people feedback and come out of my comfort zone a bit more as I can be very vague when writing comments.

My layout is just me, its organised and pink and simple which is what I really like, having labels for each blog post has also really helped as you can find everything very easily.

Anyway guys hope you enjoyed reading.

Chat soon!

-EH

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